Rekiki

[meziki]

Name:Rekiki

Age:5(wolf years)

Gender:male

Species:black gray wolf

Personality:Rekiki is very blood thirsty at times, but other than that he is protective, nice to his alies, & sleeps & eats all the time. He can be mean at times aswell. He can kill with out hesitation. He can cause some mischief aswell. He loves to be pet on the head (like cheza does to kiba).

Appearance:Rekiki has a marvelous black coat. He has red eyes as dark as blood. His fangs are as sharp as blades & stick out half a centimeter out of his mouth. In his human form he appers to be a teen. Wears a gray hoody & a spiked coller.

History: To gain the place as alpha, he killed both his mother and father. He assumed that the pack would except him as alpha, but they baned him from the pack, never again to join. He was left in the cold arctic tundra for weeks on end. Then finally I had found him almost frozen to death.I stayed by him with food and warm water.When he had awoken I took care of him until he was healthy again.

[Kit]

ooc: before this is accepted, you have to fix the spelling and gramatical errors to the best of your ability. Do not rush things, and take your time as you reread it to spell check ^-^
It's important to spell things correctly so it is easier to understand you.
Also please use complete sentences ^-^b

[meziki]

ohhhhhh,ok sorry i am no good at spelling

[meziki]

Thar you go.

[Kit]

*sigh*
1.) try not to double post. it's okay ever so often, but if you need to edit a previous statement, there is an edit button at the top right of you post box.
2.) I reread you paragraphs, and I still found it loaded with errors. I went through and corrected a total of 14 spelling mistakes and 19 grammatical mistakes.
A few mistakes is fine, as to live is to error....but haveint that many errors makes it difficult to read your sentences clearly.
Please make sure to reread everything before you post, and put a space between every sentence. If you are strugging with spelling, try putting your paragraph through a spell checker (It's located at the bottom of the reply box, next to the Preview button) before you post.
other then that, it seems fine.